请各位帮我看一下这篇英语作文有什么问题!!!或者是错误!谢谢!内容应该算是很容易的~!

MysummervacationplanInthesummerholiday,I'mgoingtogotoYangshuowithmyparents.Wearegoing... My summer vacation plan
In the summer holiday, I'm going to go to Yangshuo with my parents. We are going to go by bus and we are going for two days. I'm going to go to Westen street with my sister .I want to take a photo in Wseten street, because there is very beautiful!
We are going for five days.
Then we go home.
I will go to the park to fiy kite with my friends. At home, I will do my homework and help my mother do housework.
This is my summer vacation plan.
I love summer holiday!

回答得好有分加!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

顺便问一下,那个 vacation 是什么意思?summer vacation 呢?还有(回到家后)用英语怎么说?
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My summer vacation(假期)plan

In the summer holiday, I'm going to YangShuo with my parents. We are going there by bus for two days. I'm going to the Westen Street with my sister. I want to take some photos at the Westen Street, because it is so beautiful there !!!
你到底是5 天还是2天???
I will go to the park to fly a kite with my friends. At home, I will do my homework and help my mother do some housework.

该改的都改了,没有语病了。 vacation 是假期的意思。 回到家后可以说:after I get(got) home 或者 After I home
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