Question

急~在线等，写英文简历，请高手帮忙翻译一段工作描述

工作地点：长沙
职业描述：
1，负责网站会员资格和广告的销售，主要销售对象为长沙区域的外向型工厂和贸易商。
2、通过各种渠道搜集潜在客户信息，再通过电话拜访快速筛选其中的目标客户并与客户预约上门拜访时间。
3、通过上门拜访了解客户的客观情况，利用销售技巧深挖客户需求，推荐我们的服务。
4、充分运用销售经验和判断标准以提高效率。
5、在完成个人销售目标的同时积极配合团队完成团队目标。
取得的成绩：
1，业绩稳定，2006年7月-2007年7月全年完成销售额30万
2，2007年度销售区域排名第4
3，平均每天拜访10家客户，积累了的销售经验和随机应变能力，这将成为我一身中最大的财富。
有正常翻译的吗?网上翻译的有很多语法貌似不对

Answer 1

Location: Changsha
Occupational Description:
1, responsible for membership and advertising sales, the main target for the Changsha regional export-oriented factories and traders.
2, through various channels to collect information of potential customers, and then the phone call on the rapid screening of the target customers and customer-site visit appointment time.
3, through home visits, the objective understanding of the situation, marketing skills to those customer needs, we recommend the service.
4, make full use of sales experience and judgement standards to improve efficiency.
5, the completion of the individual sales target at the same time actively cooperate with the team complete the team goals.
The results achieved:
1, performance and stability, in July 2006 - 2007 July annual sales of 300,000
2,2007 annual sales region ranked No. 4
3, an average of 10 customers a day visit, has accumulated experience in sales and ability to respond to circumstances, I will become one of the greatest wealth.

Answer 2

1, We are responsible for website membership and sale of advertise, main sale object is long sand district of extrovert type factory and trader.
2,We collect customer's information through various outlet, and a telephone interview so that among them of target customer quickly and reserve each customer's visiting time.
3,Beside,we go to visit and understand customer's objective information, 这一句不会翻译.
4, We are make better use of sale experience and （不会，不好意思啊）
5, At the same time，we actively match with our team completion sale target.
Achievements:
1, the accomplishment is very better, the whole yearses effect a sale a sum 300,000 from July 2006 to July 2007 .
2, annual sales region ranked No. 4 in 2007.
3, We visited average of 10 customers a day and we has accumulated experience in sales and ability to respond to circumstances, it will become the biggest wealth in my whole life.

不知道翻译的对不对，你自己再整理一下吧。我的水平也有限，望见谅！

Answer 3

这位职场的新人!!我从事管理多年,面试过许多人,

我将真诚的给你一个建议,并希望你认真去听取!

在应聘中,自己有多少本事就体现多少能力,不要夸大自己的能力,因为那将会给企业给招聘方一个肥皂泡,对你将会有高期望值,然后呢,随之终有一天也将会失望的.

就说这个英文简历吧,多一份会有一个面子,那么OK,我来问你两个问题:第一,如果我在面试你的时候,我将突然用英文询问你两句话,你将能够听的明白并且对答如流吗?如果是,我将无偿可以为你翻译;第二,如果企业认为你英文还不错,把你分配到需要应用英文的职务上,你怎么办?是现学现用吗?那是否来得及??

好的,我就给你这么多建议,我可以理解现在应届生每年的就业压力.但是,我更希望你是一个具有良好诚信的人,当然我并不怀疑你的诚信,看你的资料还是很优秀的一个人,只是我没明白你要英文简历的初衷吧,

I believe that you will give me a satisfactory argument, is it true?