Question

大家帮忙修改一下这篇英语演讲稿

Since we enter the 21st century,the spirit of cooperation has becoming more and more important.Win-win is a popular word.In this way,add one big to two,and not only equal two.
In this highly developed society,the progress of every science and technology is the result of cooperation.The Human Genome Project is a good example.More than 1000 top scientist from different countries participated in the great project.Every scientist may be a 'one',but one plus one,the final result is much greater than 'two'.
The theme of our society is not competition,but cooperation.Every stage of practice show that people at any time with peer cooperation, not mutual struggle, or to cooperate with the outside world rather than self-enclosed, often when the history of the development of faster, better, but on the contrary.We can benefit from each oher if we creat value together.We must correctly handle the relationship between cooperation and competition, and learn to cooperate with other.We need to make one and one is bigger than two.
第一行的从句的怎么改？
具体点，我不懂语法

Answer 1

第一行里，有has becoming这个语法吗？ 当然是has become啊。
add one big to two, and not only equal two. 语法有问题。I guess what you mean is: one plus one is often bigger than two, rather than equal to two.
第三行more than 1000 top scientist(s)
第四行可以考虑把in the great project里的the 改成this，读起来更通顺更容易理解和强调。
第七行show 应为shows。同时，请认真修改它后面的从句。该从句主语是people,但谓语是什么，宾语又是什么。 你可以把汉语意思说出来，我看看怎么改好。
最后一句的语法又有错误。可改成：We need to make one plus one bigger than two.
总体来讲，我觉得演讲稿的内容还是很不错的，稍加修改就很好了，你的英语很好。

Answer 2

Since we enter the 21st century, cooperation spirit has become more and more important.Win-win is a popular word.In this way,add one to one is bigger than two,but not equal .
In this highly developed society,the progress of every science and technology is the achivement of cooperation.The Human Genome Project is a good example.More than 1000 top scientists from different countries participate in this great project.Every scientist may be a 'one',but one plus one,the final result is much greater than 'two'.
The theme of our society is not competition,but cooperation.Every stage of practice shows that people at any time with peer cooperation, not mutual struggle, or to cooperate with the outside world rather than self-enclosed, often when the history of the development faster, better, but on the contrary.We can benefit from each other if we creat value together.We should correctly handle the relationship between cooperation and competition, and learn to cooperate with each other.We need to make one and one bigger than two.

Answer 3

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