初三的英语作文，帮我修改一下
Canyouimaginelifewithoutwater?Canyouimaginethatyoucan'twashclothes,cleanthefloor,cook...
Can you imagine life without water? Can you imagine that you can't wash clothes,clean the floor,cook and even drink one day? If you think the water on the earth won't be used up? Maybe you never noticed that the water on the earth is less than before.And the water in the many places hasn't been drink because it wasn't safe for us. So,we must save the water every minute.
But how can we save the water in in life? I think we can use the water has been wash rice to wash vegetables rice. We can use the clean water to wash clothes, and use the dirty water to rush to toilet.It can save much water if everyone does that.And have you have any advece about saving water?
I believe that our lifes won't be without water if everyone saves water!
看语法有没有错误 哪里不通顺
希望多提意见 展开
But how can we save the water in in life? I think we can use the water has been wash rice to wash vegetables rice. We can use the clean water to wash clothes, and use the dirty water to rush to toilet.It can save much water if everyone does that.And have you have any advece about saving water?
I believe that our lifes won't be without water if everyone saves water!
看语法有没有错误 哪里不通顺
希望多提意见 展开
2个回答
展开全部
Can you imagine that you can't wash clothes,clean the floor,cook or even drink one day? or代替and
And the water in many places is not drinkable at all because of the concern of safety.
I think we can use the water has been used to wash rice to wash vegetables.
I believe that our lifes won't be run out of water if everyone saves water!
剩下的都还不错 把上面的句子改改就好了
And the water in many places is not drinkable at all because of the concern of safety.
I think we can use the water has been used to wash rice to wash vegetables.
I believe that our lifes won't be run out of water if everyone saves water!
剩下的都还不错 把上面的句子改改就好了
本回答由提问者推荐
已赞过
已踩过<
评论
收起
你对这个回答的评价是？
推荐律师服务：
若未解决您的问题，请您详细描述您的问题，通过百度律临进行免费专业咨询
