Question

谁能帮我把这个翻译成英文

自我介绍
我叫....，我的英语名字是...，性别：女，我今天15岁，出生于1993年9月9日，我毕业于59中学，在这所学校里，我有很多很好的老师和同学，我很爱他们，我想我会铭记他们一辈子，初中的三年会成为我人生中最美丽的一段回忆。当然，高中三年的时光也一样会变得很美好！
我最喜欢的学科是语文、英语和历史，我喜欢语文，因为我是一个中国人~我喜欢英语因为我非常喜欢我的第一个英文老师，她给了我一个很好的启蒙，给我留下了极深刻的印象。
我的爱好是写故事，我认为文字是一个很吸引人的东西，我曾经学过钢琴、绘画、舞蹈，但是我都因为学业而放弃了，我曾经因此很遗憾过，所以我决不会放弃我的学业。
我的英语基础并不好，我也经常不理解很多的语法，所以我记得在我初三的时候，我对英语十分的努力，我用了最多的时间来学习英语，所以我得到了一个不坏的成绩，这是一个很大的进步，我非常感激我的英语老师——冀老师，她给了我很多帮助，帮我解答了我所有的疑问。
高中我会更努力的追求我的理想！

我自己已经写好了，但是担心有语法不对，所以想请比较专业的英文翻译这帮我翻译一下，这是我高中的第一份作业，希望可以没有错误！
谢谢~~~
请大家在9.7 10点之前给我答案~~~回答好的再加20分~

Answer 1

是演讲吗? 不是演讲就不需要加括号中的话了
（Hello, everybody or Good morning(afternoon), everybody. ）
My chinese name is ,,My english name is . I am a 15 years old girl . I born on .., and graduated from No.59 Middle school.I have so many beutiful memories back to there, like cute classmats,brilliant teachers. I love them and their vivid image will be in my heart forever. Middle school life was one of my best memories. of course i belive the high school life will be very wonderful also.
My top three favorite subjects are Chinese, English and histroy. As a chinese of course i like it. To talk about English, because i like my first english teacher. she led me to a good learning way. She is very impressive.
I am also a big story fan , cause characters are so attactive to me.
i've learned dancing, drawing and palying piano before, i had to give up them eventually because i need to concentrate on my study now. it is a pity.
To be honest my english is not so good. sometimes i couldn't understand grammas very well. but if you work hard, you will have a good result. For example, when i was in Grade 8 I spend lots of time on it. so i was paid well. i do improve a lot. I really appreciate my english teacher Ms..., without her help i couldn't solve all my puzzles.
I will keep on purchasing my dream during my high school life.

Answer 2

你可以把你写的发上来 我帮你修改一下 这样比较好 不然我怕写的有点深了 你不明白

Answer 3

my name is called .. and my english name is ..I'm a girl of 15 Iwas born in 1993.9.9 .Igraduated from 59 midd le school In that school ,There are los o f teaCHERS AND CLASS MATES whom Ihave a deep love for I'll remember them for always .3-year school life should be my beat memory ! so is next 3-year life ! i most love chinese English and history as a chinese I love chinese.I love English Because of my first english teacher she always give me good idea !and she has pierced me to the core ! Ilove writing stories For it's an attraction to most people I learnt piano paint dance .and i gave up them because of my study Ifelt quite sorry son I'll never give up my study I'm weak in english I can't always understand grammar .when Iwas in grade 3 I work hard on it soI get a good grade That's agood step for me !I appreciated MrYI's help and what he did for me In future I'll try my best to achieve my dream!! [你QQ多少？我1033172514 加我！共同进步！！！！！

Answer 4

I am sorry that i can not help you,someone will give you a favor,with glory and my respect carry on.