Question

I am a high school student,the college ent

I am a high school student,the college entrance examination is coming,I kept give myself the excuse to relax.But no one would be disappointed.No one would even know.Though I am a boy looks very nice,but I can stop,because I have a great dream,"if you have a dream,you must depend it"! in my opinion,dream is not necessary lonely on the way,in fact,I need most is to support voice,every day is can feel happy.I really hope I can have a good man accompany me to struggle for the dream.

Answer 1

高中生能写出这样的短文已是很不错的了。加油！
有几个地方需要改进：
I am a high school student,the college entrance examination is coming,I kept [give -> giving] myself [the -> an] excuse to relax.But no one would be disappointed.No one would even know.Though I am a boy [加上 who] looks very nice, [删去 but] I can stop,because I have a great [dream -> dreamer], "if you have a dream,you must depend it"! in my opinion, [dream -> dreaming] is not necessary lonely [on the -> in a] way,in fact, [加上 what] I need most is to support [my?] voice, every day [is -> I] can feel happy.I really hope I can have a good man [加上 to] accompany me to struggle for the dream.

追问

谢谢你！你是一个好人

本来好评是给你的，但是不小心按错了，好评给了其他人

没有按错。嘿嘿，你的英语一定很好吧？

追答

你能进步就好。为你鼓掌！
我生活在英语环境里，多年从事教学。很高兴能给你帮助。

Answer 2

我的梦想 考上安徽大学

追答

高考顺利

我的梦想 考上安徽大学

追问

你也是高三学生吗？

我刚刚才登陆，没有及时看到，很抱歉

我刚刚才登陆，没有及时看到，很抱歉

追答

不是 高一的

不过目标是安徽大学

没事

追问

恩恩

有理想！加油↖(^ω^)↗，看好你

我是过来人，我要告诉你的是，高一一开始就打好基础，高三时才会游刃有余，一开始打好基础是很重要的！

追答

我知道 可我选理 好难

追问

？

你们高二分文理还是高一？

如果没有选文理，就凭自己的兴趣去选文理。选了理科，就要认真去学，一开始就认真学

追答

上学期就分了 学校重视升学率

我比较喜欢文 但真心记不住

但是理科数学真心难