英语改错题 求帮忙
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I'am writing to thank you for your timely help giving(改为given) to my monther when she was in trouble.
My monther told me that when she was riding in the street on(去掉on) last Monday, the(改为one) car cut in suddenly. That made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg serious(改为seriously), but the driver didn't stop. When you saw what had happened, you came to give him(改为her) a hand at once.You helped my monther to get a taxi and take her to the nearest hospital. When the doctor said my monther's leg(加入was) boken, you phoned my father.Therefore(改为However), before(改为After) my father got to the hospital, you had left. My monther is now on(改为in) a good condition and she may come home next week.Thanks so much for your helps(改为help).
Yours sincerely
Lihua
My monther told me that when she was riding in the street on(去掉on) last Monday, the(改为one) car cut in suddenly. That made her fall off her bike and hurt her leg serious(改为seriously), but the driver didn't stop. When you saw what had happened, you came to give him(改为her) a hand at once.You helped my monther to get a taxi and take her to the nearest hospital. When the doctor said my monther's leg(加入was) boken, you phoned my father.Therefore(改为However), before(改为After) my father got to the hospital, you had left. My monther is now on(改为in) a good condition and she may come home next week.Thanks so much for your helps(改为help).
Yours sincerely
Lihua
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