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还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?请以“An unforgettable experience”为题写一篇短文，描述一次难

还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗?请以“An unforgettable experience”为题写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感想。要求：1. 词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。2. 开头已给出。不计入总词数。An Unforgettable Experience Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. ___________________________

Answer 1

Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 11 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Fengxian and we needed to live in a small dormitory for two days. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly. And then we stood in a line. We leant a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. Every day, we had to practice more than five hours. Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unforgettable experience it is!

试题分析：本题要求以“An unforgettable experience”为题写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你的感想。根据要求可知本文应以第一人称书写，主要使用一般过去时态。在写作时要适当使用一些连接词，使文章前后连贯，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】本文中多次使用连接词and、but等使得文中前后连贯。