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想请各位英语好的大神们，修改一下这个翻译过来的摘要，有没有语法错误。拜托了！！！

摘要：犬瘟热作为犬科动物的一种危害性较大的疫病，常常给犬主造成很大的精神损失和物质损失。本文就接诊的14例犬瘟热病例，分析犬瘟热在发病时的具体症状，临床检测以及治疗方案等来分析犬瘟热的治愈情况。由于犬瘟热初期症状与普通感冒很相似，精确诊断会增加治愈率。及时免疫以及宠物犬的购买方式也是导致犬瘟热发生的两大因素。在临床诊治中，不同品种犬，在不同治疗方案下，其治疗效果不同，治愈率也不同。
关键词：犬瘟热、症状、诊断、免疫、治疗方案

Diagnosis and treatment of 14 cases of canine distemper
Pu Xiaowei Instructor: Guo Qingyong
Abstract: As a kind of harm of canine distemper disease of canine animal, often to the dog owner caused great spiritual and material losses. In this paper, 14 cases of canine distemper cases admissions, analysis of canine distemper virus specific symptoms at the onset, clinical detection and treatment of canine distemper cure. Because the early symptoms of canine distemper and the common cold is similar, the accurate diagnosis can increase the cure rate. Timely immunization and pet dog purchase is two major factors leading to occurrence of canine distemper. In clinical diagnosis and treatment, different varieties of dogs, in different treatments, the treatment effect is different, the cure rate is also different.
Keywords: canine distemper, symptoms, diagnosis, treatment, immune

Answer 1

你是直接套用机器翻译的吧

As a kind of harmful epidemic disease to canine animal, canine distemper often bring about the dog owner a lot of spiritual and material losses. In this paper, 14 cases of canine distemper would be studied from the specific symptom of disease, clinical detection to therapeutic regimen so as to analyze its cures. Because the early symptoms of canine distemper is similar to the common cold, accurate diagnosis would be helpful to increase the cure rate. Timely immunization and pet dog purchase are two major factors leading to occurrence of canine distemper. In clinical diagnosis and treatment, , the treatment effect and the cure rate could vary with various breeds of dogs and different treatments.

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