Question

假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历。

假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历。给外教写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式

Answer 1

2016高考英语新课标1
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 2

这是干嘛？普通沟通的时候用的还是作文里面？平常的话就说
Hello Mr. xx,
Nice day! This is Li Hua, I want to go for a part time job during this Summer holiday, attached the applying letter and personal resume I made, could you please kindly help me checking and modifying the words and format when time is convenient? Really appreciate for that.

Have a nice day!
Li Hua

Answer 3

自己写，净想偷懒。