Question

英语作文，你更喜欢哪种生活？城市生活还是乡村生活？

老师说要学着拓展题目内容。可是我只会死板的写。请大家给点意见。
还有结尾，我真的一直都写不好。求大神帮忙指点

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Answer 1

其实你写的还不错，列举了一些城市生活的好处，基本可以支持你的观点。小小的建议：1.列举各种支持材料内容的时候，稍微显得有点缺乏条理，你可以按照某一些层面来列举，可能会显得更具有调理性，更能够抓住评卷人的注意力；2.在列举城市的便捷之处的时候，顺便简单提及乡村生活所存在的困难，让你的论点显得更加具有说服力；3.开头段还可以，但是结尾段不够坚决果断，稍加处理，就很完美啦！希望我的建议能够帮助到你！

Answer 2

城市生活的好处 第三点重点突出不明显 反而感觉是城市生活给人带来了压力 最后一段 乡村生活使人慵懒 不能用absord. 可以说 people living in the countryside can often find themselves indulged in a slow-paced lifestyle which hinders their occupational development. 另外 as a matter of fact体现不了逻辑关系 表转折可换成on the other hand. 剩下不通顺的地方你可以自己找找添枝加叶再加以修改

Answer 3

City life or country life?
That's a good question to pick the answer. Whichever I choose, I benefit sth and also lose sth. It's human nature that people always envision what they do not have.
Although it's hard to choose, I select country life. As the rapid growth of economy as well as the more and more bigger crowds in the city, people could hardly feel relaxed both physically and psychologically. Tension, nervous, upset, timelines, burdens become many people's nightmare. Vary from students to workers, especially those who in the middle ages, who have to face the dilemma between stress of life and work, health issue is becoming a huge problem for city people.
While take a look at the country people, who live away from gas pollution, high-speed life, tend to enjoy a peace and calm life. It's poor somehow, but who can deny that leading a life with nature is the most healthy life?
What is the most important thing in the world? OF course is health. Health not simply means physically health, but also psychologically health.
Anyway, it's not that people refuse to lead a simple life, but they have to live in the cities. If it is possible, most of people would love to face the mountains and hills , breathe the fresh air, and listen to birds singing.
I hope everyone could lead a life, simple but interesting.

Answer 4

In my view ,I perfer living in the country ,because it help us to be the center of life more easy.
First ,the city has a better living standard than the countryside.As we know ,we can get better higher educational condition ,which is so important to us that if we miss it ,our lives won't be complete.at the same time ,it provides us with better health care system,which can help us live a less painful and healthy life.
Second ,the city doesn't only provide us with abundant material supplies but also give us entertainment.the city build up a lot public facilities ,such as parks,cinemas ,fitness centers and so on.we can breath fresh air ,do exercises,have colorfull weekends.
Finally ,the thinking patterns of citizen are more open,they can receive new things quickly.what is more ,even though they don't like it ,they will respect it as your freedom rather than restrain your choice.
Generally speaking,if you want to keep up your pace with times,living in the cities will be your best choice

Answer 5

城市生活的好处 第三点重点突出不明显 反而感觉是城市生活给人带来了压力 最后一段 乡村生活使人慵懒 不能用absord. 可以说 people living in the countryside can often find themselves indulged in a slow-paced lifestyle which hinders their occupational development. 另外 as a matter of fact体现不了逻辑关系 表转折可换成on the other hand. 剩下不通顺的地方你可以自己找找添枝加叶再加以修改