Question

外企面试英语自我介绍

这是我拟写的汉语的，英语实在是太烂了，求高手帮忙！！！

我叫XX，很高兴参加贵公司的面试。我毕业于沈阳化工大学。本人诚实，性格开朗，工作认真负责。专业知识过硬，目前是初级工程师。熟练使用各种办公软件及办公工具。时间观念强，有较好的学习能力和实践能力。现在XX工作，能熟练的应用XX软件. 今天我应聘贵公司的XX岗位，是希望将我的所学充分发挥，并能在这里学习成长。希望能有机会与您成为同事。谢谢。

Answer 1

Good morning Sir, (What will you say if it is a woman?)

　　I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me thank you for finding time in the midst of pressing affairs.

　　I am 25 years old and I am local. (I live locally sounds better) I am seeking an opportunity to work with XXX as Sales. (..IN sales or As a Sales representative/whatever).My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.

　　I have a bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field.(pause) Graduated from the XXX university in 2002. Over the past three years, I have worked with XXX Co.,Ltd as Sales (again, in sales or as a sales man/person/rep?) who responsible (with responsibility mainly) for the market of Hunan. During this period, I have learnt much. I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your company.

　　I enjoy thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, (and I am )able to bear work pressure.

　　In my free time, I often participate (in) activities such as table tennis (and) badminton.

　　I am expecting to become your colleague on some day. (More tactful to say ’I would love to become you colleague/join the company)

　　Because being offhand in advance, let’s leave it at that. (This sentence makes no sense. ’Being offhand’ means to be rude, inconsiderate, ill-mannered so I don’t think that is whay you mean! In advance of what? ’Let’s leave it at that’ is a command, it sounds rather abrupt and ill-mannered to me, again I don’t think this is what you meant. How about ’I would love to join your company and you would not regret giving me this opportunity.’ and just finish with a smile!)

　　Thanks.

Answer 2

My name is XX, the Company is pleased to participate in the interview. I graduated from Shenyang University of Chemical Technology. I am honest, cheerful, serious and responsible work. Strong expertise, currently a junior engineer. Skilled use of office software and office tools. Strong sense of time, a better learning ability and practical ability. Now XX work, skilled XX software applications, today I am applying your company XX positions in the hope that I have learned to give full play, and can learn and grow here. I hope to have the opportunity to become your colleagues. Thank you.

追问

像熟练使用...，时间观念强等都是字面直接翻译的，不用在前面加些连接词或I can...什么的，感觉背起来怪怪的~

Answer 3

哪里好，哪家好，，不知道怎么选
作为一个过来人，我总结两点
1.看看性价比 2.看看师资力量
把握好两点就可以下决定，本人经验之谈
最好就是能找个课后有跟进的
保证效果，不过现在好像不多了
如果你还没找到，不妨看看我这家
效果决定报读，你可以先试试Free课程
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_6587083d0101fnvx.html

Answer 4

Sir or madam,
Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is ***, **years old. I come from ******,the capital of *******Province. I graduated from the ******* department of *****University in **** ,****.In the past *** years I have been prepareing for the postgraduate examination while I have been teaching *****in NO.****middle School and I was a head-teacher of a class in junior grade two.Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interview by you .
I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books, especially those about *******.Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.In addition ,during my college years,I was once a Net-bar technician.So, I have a comparative good command of network application.I am able to operate the computer well.I am skillful in searching for information in Internet.I am a football fan for years.Italian team is my favorite.Anyway,I feel great pity for our country’s team.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning .Of course, if I am given a chance to work ****** in this famous corporation,I will stare no effort to master a good command of advance ******.
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Answer 5

rterter好几个脚后跟