Question

英语句子 帮我看看这个绿色的句子又没有语法错误，谢谢大神，有图片？

Answer 1

没有语法错误。Based on.. 是过去分词短语作状语，one can notice... 主句 ， that... 宾语从句， which... 定语从句。

Answer 2

错是没写错，但这篇文章应该是报告吧？可以口语一点：
based on the information in the chart, one can notice that only a smaller percentage of people are sticking to the traditional methods of swiping card, cash and other means, which account for 20%, 13% and 5% respectively.
according to the chart, we can figure out that people are sticking to traditional ways of credit card 20%, cash 13%, and others 5%.

Answer 3

应该没错。
非限定性定语从句可看成复数。
based upon... 没错，固定搭配，表示基于...某事。
宾从没错，a small percentage of可以看成复数。

Answer 4

一般上发视频的时候，这个呃看起来不容易看清楚，也就是这个字要么是太细长。看得清楚，所以你最好是发图片用图片来发，这样看的是比较清楚的。

Answer 5

看了，没有语法错误！