Question

请帮忙寻找一份英语试题

只知道书面表达内容

第二节书面表达
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你原来的外籍教师Professor Jackson已经回到了美国。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：

1. 感谢他对你的帮助；

2. 介绍你和同学们最近的学习、生活情况；
3. 邀请他和家人到中国来过暑假。

Answer 1

楼上的回答有点Chingelish 的味道， （中式英文）。 比如：
开头“Happy to wirte to you.” 除非你是代笔，有点像人家叫你回信， 你说我很高兴来给你回信， 否则有点奇怪。
“after class, heated discussion questions” 不成句子。
“I believe we'll have a good day.” 这样的结尾和语句不符合美国英文的习惯。
其中别的错误如：
“an ordinary student of Xinhua School”， 用‘from’更好。如果Jackson以前教过书的话， 那应该是认识的咯， 不用自我介绍了。

“I and my classmates miss you,” 应该是“my classmates and I"
"Our study and life is very good" 这样表达的是什么意思呢？ 是说“学习和生活”， 还是说‘学习生活'?
'Li Hua' 要倒过来写， 写名后姓。

以下供参考：
Dear Professor Jackson,
How are you? (如果时隔已久， 可以说"How have you been?")

Thank you for all your help while you were in China. (要看你多感谢他了， 还可以再说的客气的话， 如“Your help has been instrumental in my study and I cannot thank you enough.")
We (my classmates and I) continue to work hard to improve our English. Everydya, we practice grammar drills, listening comprehension, and conversational skills. We also work on reading and composition. （这里描述学校英语学习状况， 人家Jackson是你的英语老师嘛。） School life has also been fulfilling. We have arts and sports almost everyday. The school has started a variety of after-school programs. Although busy, I enjoy every moment of the school life. （这里描述学校其他活动）

I do hope you and your family will come visit us this summer. Everyone is looking forward to seeing you again. Please keep in touch.

Best,
Hua （既然是认识的， 就不需要写全名， 显得生疏）

楼主清楚了吗？

Answer 2

有疑问来精锐，这里有专业的老师为您解答。

Answer 3

Dear Professor Jackson,
Happy to wirte to you.
First, let me introduce myself. I'm Li Hua, an ordinary student of Xinhua School. I wish to

express my thanks to you for your great help.I and my classmates miss you, we study hard

every day, after class, heated discussion questions. Our study and life is very good.I do

hope that your whole family will pay a visit to China one day．Look forwad to seeing you. I

believe we'll have a good day.
yours,
Li Hua

Answer 4

这是中考作文题的固定模式，我在精锐教育练过很多。历年的模拟题都有这样的，我就是通过在精锐学习然后作文最后满分的。找到方法，多背多练。祝你成功。

Answer 5

有更多一点的信息就更好了。