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my mother’s birthday is in winter. its february 25th.our family was happy. my brother and i went to birthday cake store and bought a big birthday cake for her. my aunt gave flowers to her.
she’s very happy. at night we all went to a five stars restaurant. the food was very good. after dinner we gave the cake to mother. she’s very happy. we said“happy birthday”to my mother.
i love my mother.
我妈妈的生日在冬天。二月25th.our家庭幸福。我和哥哥去了生日蛋糕店,给她买了一个大生日蛋糕。我姑姑给她送花。她很高兴。晚上我们都去了一五星级饭店。食物很好。晚饭后我们把蛋糕给了妈妈。她很高兴。我们对妈妈说“生日快乐”。
我爱我的妈妈。
2016-05-10
my mother’s birthday is in winter. its february 25th.our family was happy. my brother and i went to birthday cake store and bought a big birthday cake for her. my aunt gave flowers to her. she’s very happy. at night we all went to a five stars restaurant. the food was very good. after dinner we gave the cake to mother. she’s very happy. we said “happy birthday” to my mother.
i love my mother.
In May.
I'm going to make a cake for my mother.
I'm going to sing a song to him.
My family wants to tell him thank you.
I'm going to tell him a story.