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My holiday 　　Jack 　　I have a very cheerful holiday in “The National Day”. My parent

and I went to Shanghai about nine days ago. We got there by plane, I think that shanghai must be a very big city, and there are a lot of tall buildings. First we went into the hotel named”chuang ye”. And we saw the tall big building “Shanghai TV Tower”, at nine in the evening, we got back to the hotel. The second day, we visited Zhouzhuang. It’s very beautiful and the air was good, I bought my favorite toy : weapons. I like them very much. Shanghai’s food tasted good. Today we are very happy and tired, so we slept early in the night. The third day however, we didn’t go anywhere, we stayed in the hotel until late in the afternoon. In the evening, we came back to Tianjin by plane to. This travel was fantastic!意思

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我的假期 杰克
我在国庆节度过一个快乐的假期。我和父母大约九天前去了上海。我们乘飞机去了那。我认为上海必定是一个很大的城市，还有很多高层建筑。首先我们去了一家名叫创业的旅馆，我们看见了高高的建筑上海电视塔。晚上九点钟，我们返回旅馆。第二天，我们去了周庄。它很美并且空气很好。我买了最喜欢的玩具：武器。我非常喜欢它们。上海的食物尝起来很好吃。今天我们很快乐又疲惫。所以我们晚上很早睡了。然而第三天，我们没去任何地方。我们待在旅馆直到下午很晚。在晚上，我们坐飞机返回天津。这次旅行棒极了