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安全对每个人都很重要.请根据以下信息内容提示,写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。

安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示： 1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；
2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially
important to us students.____________________________________________________
绝对原创，不要网上和英汉互译上的，要老师看不出来的，语法全对的。

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Answer 1

Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.
First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are
having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our
hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when
we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we
should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even
fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and
keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Recently,six killing accident happen in elementary school,which have a bad influences on our social safety.These influences can be described as follow.
Initially,the elementary school killing accident cause the students'panic,worrying about their own safety.What’s more,it also cause the parents’and teathers’ worry,and parents and teachers must pay more attention to their children’s and student’s safety.Last but not least,due to this,many other people hold panic for their own safety.
From what we have discussed ,we know the serious consequence of killing accident in elementary school.So facing this accident,relative department should take effective measures to reduce the killing accident in elementary school,reducing the social panic,assurencing the social safety,

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