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关于这个的作文。 Directions:For this part,you areallowed 30 minutes to write a compositi

关于这个的作文。
Directions:For this part,you areallowed 30 minutes to write a composition one topic:should we help other in need? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in chinese.
1现在经常有这样的现象发生:路上有人摔倒，没人敢上前帮忙？
2这是人们的功德心却失还是其他什么原因呢？
3你对比有何看法？

Answer 1

写作思路：写出自己对于蚌湖他人这种行为的看法，然后在文中体现出帮与不帮的后果和对自己的影响。

正文：

We need the help of others in our lives whenever we travel to other places or stay at home. On the other hand, helping others makes us happy, and we also feel great happiness.

我们需要别人的帮助在我们的生活中，每当我们旅行到其他地方或待在家里。另一方面，帮助别人会使我们快乐，我们也感到极大的快乐。

When we trust strangers, they will feel a sense of great achievement, and so do I.

当我们信任陌生人时，对方会感到一种莫名大成就感，当然我也是。

Some people say that strangers shouldn't be helped because they can deceive others.

有些人说陌生人不应该被帮助，因为会讹人。

First of all, some people hold the view that helping others is a traditional Chinese virtue, saying that we should help strangers when they are in trouble.

首先，有些人持这乐于助人是中国的传统美德的观点说我们应该帮助陌生人当他们遇到麻烦时。

However, there are also some people who think that assistance to strangers may cause great harm to themselves, so we should not help strangers.

然而，也有一些人认为对陌生人的援助可能会给自己造成巨大的伤害，所以，我们不应该帮助陌生人。

Although these are facts, I think we should help strangers at the right time without hesitation.

虽然这些都是事实，但是我认为我们应该在恰当的时候毫不犹豫地帮助陌生人。

We all need help. If we don't help others, how can we expect others to help us.

我们每个人都需要帮助，如果我们不帮助别人，我们怎么能期待别人帮助我们呢。

So it's necessary for us to help strangers when they need help.

所以，我们有必要帮助陌生人当他们需要帮助的时候。

Answer 2

Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But what’s strange nowadays is that people dare not show their helping hands to those in need. I would like to elaborate my views on this issue.
Firstly, I think people’s moral sense has degraded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. Secondly, there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits.
In general, I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.

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