英语作文假设你是上海一所高中的赵一璐,给耶鲁大学写一封申请信？
申请书范文：
Dear Sir/Madam，
Iam writing to apply for admission to your Graduate School to pursuea Master＇s Degree in Computer Science。 My intended date of entrance is fall 2004。
In July 2001， I obtained my BA in Computer Science from Shanghai Jiao Tong University. My undergraduate record is excellent.
Ihave taken the TOEFL and the GRE Advanced Test.My scores on the two tests are 630 and 980 respectively.In addition， I have sufficient financial resources to meet my educational expenses.
Ihave always been interested in Computer Science.I would appreciate it very much if you would send me the necessary application materials for graduate admission at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely！
翻译：
尊敬的先生/女士：
我想申请你的研究生院计算机科学硕士学位。我的计划入学日期是2004年秋季
2001年7月，我在上海交通大学获得计算机科学学士学位。我的本科成绩很好。
我参加了托福和GRE高级考试测试，我的两次考试的分数是630和980分别在另外，我有足够的财力来支付我的教育费用。
我一直对计算机科学很感兴趣，如果您能尽早给我寄去必要的研究生入学申请材料，我将不胜感激。
谨上！
写作思路：把你想上耶鲁大学的理由写下来。
申请书范文：
Dear Sir/Madam
尊敬的先生/女士：
Iam writing to apply for admission to your Graduate School to pursuea Master＇s Degree in Computer Science。 My intended date of entrance is fall 2004。
我想申请你的研究生院计算机科学硕士学位。我的计划入学日期是2004年秋季。
In July 2001， I obtained my BA in Computer Science from Shanghai Jiao Tong University. My undergraduate record is excellent.
2001年7月，我在上海交通大学获得计算机科学学士学位。我的本科成绩很好。
Ihave taken the TOEFL and the GRE Advanced Test.My scores on the two tests are 630 and 980 respectively.In addition， I have sufficient financial resources to meet my educational expenses.
我参加了托福和GRE高级考试测试，我的两次考试的分数是630和980分别在另外，我有足够的财力来支付我的教育费用。
Ihave always been interested in Computer Science.I would appreciate it very much if you would send me the necessary application materials for graduate admission at your earliest convenience.
我一直对计算机科学很感兴趣，如果您能尽早给我寄去必要的研究生入学申请材料，我将不胜感激。
Yours sincerely！
谨上！
My name is YiLu Zhao in Shanghai senior high school, I' m writing to apply to study in your university. I read about the admission information while surfing the Internet the other day. I'm really interested in it.
For one thing, I' m outgoing and I can get on well with all my classmates. For another, I do well in most of my subjects, especially in English. I like English poems and movies. Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther King, President Obama and so on, are also my favorite.What' s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.
As we all know, communication is very important and I like to communicate with different people, so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university. And I believe I can help promote cultural communication between China and the world.
I' m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Yilu Zhao (随便写的凑合看吧)
