如何写作文的结尾?

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写作思路:从嫦娥奔月的故事为写作目的、中心主旨入手,结合自身感受,真实得描述,新鲜有趣的材料,以使文章中心思想鲜明、深刻地表现出来,正文:

Mid Autumn Festival, a festival of eating moon cakes, is also the middle of autumn.

中秋节,吃月饼的节日,也是中秋节。

On that day, sister Chang'e rushed to the moon and left her husband, Hou Yi, to the sky alone. Look at the moon in the night sky and see how high the rabbit can jump? Look at the starry sky decorated with gold.

那一天,嫦娥姐姐奔向月球,丢下丈夫后羿独自一人上天。看看夜空中的月亮,看看兔子能跳多高?看那金色装饰的星空。

Jade rabbit, sister Chang'e's friend, is constantly helping her with the elixir. Although the medicine was sweet, it was bitter in Chang'e's heart.

嫦娥姐姐的朋友玉兔,不停地帮她拿长生不老药。这药虽然甜,但在嫦娥心里却是苦的。

Every 15 nights, when the full moon rises, Chang'e will pour the medicine on the earth. The man who can receive it will come to the moon, but each time it is not Hou Yi.

每隔15个晚上,当满月升起时,嫦娥就会把药倒在地球上。能接受的人会来到月球,但每次都不是后羿。

On the night of the 15th century, Chang'e spilled her medicine on the earth. A man was lucky enough to receive it, and immediately he was slowly sucked up. But in Chang'e's heart, 

15世纪的夜晚,嫦娥把药洒在了地上。一个男人很幸运地收到了它,他立刻被慢慢地吸了起来。但在嫦娥心中

there was only Hou Yi. When he saw the medicine bottle shaking, he thought it was Hou Yi, so he looked down at the edge of the moon, but it was not Hou Yi who was waiting, but a very kind person named "Wu Gang"

只有后羿。当他看到药瓶在晃动时,他以为是后羿,于是低头看了看月边,但等待的不是后羿,而是一个非常善良的人,名叫“吴刚”

Chang'e was startled. I and Yutu were the only people in the Moon Palace. She pushed Wu Gang down

嫦娥吓了一跳。我和玉兔是月宫里唯一的人。她推倒了吴刚

Wu Gang fell down and did not die, but was caught by an old fairy. Chang'e was very sad and decided not to spill medicine on the world. 

吴刚摔倒没死,却被一个老仙女抓住了。嫦娥很伤心,决定不把药洒在世界上。

Hou Yi knew that every time Chang'e had to sprinkle some Potion on the earth. He waited under the moon on the 15th of every month, but he could not wait any moreDuring the Mid Autumn Festival, take a look at the moon, the jade rabbit in the moon and the sad Chang'e.

后羿知道,每次嫦娥都要在地上撒些药水。每个月的15号,他都会在月下守候,但是中秋节的时候,他再也等不到了,看看月亮,月亮里的玉兔和悲伤的嫦娥。

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1、用抒情式点题结尾。如“老师,无论我走到哪里,我都走不出您的视野。感谢您的一路呵护,一路鼓励!”(《感谢恩师》)抒发了对老师的感激之情。
  2、用希望式点题结尾。如“把理解带到人吧,尽量给别人减少一分病苦,增添一分快乐!”(《最爱的人,别伤他最深》)
  3、用推理式点题结尾。如“有一颗感恩的心,会让我们的社会多一宽容与理解,少一些职责与推委;多一些和谐与温暖,少一些争吵与冷漠;多一些真诚与团结,少一些欺骗与涣散……”(《有一颗感恩的心》)。作者用“有一颗感恩的心,会……”的句式,点明了“要有一颗感恩的心”这个主题。
  4、用表决式点题结尾。如“可以确定的是,无论前路阳光明媚,或是崎岖陡峭,我会坚定地——痛并快乐着。”(《痛并快乐着》)既点明主题,又回应文题,可谓一箭双雕。
  5、用展望式点题结尾。如“我,我的未来不是梦!”(《我的未来不是梦》
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