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英文作文!救命!

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healthy life!!

Everyone of us wants a healthy life but do you know what is the meaning of healthy life? Firstly
I think we need to have a balance diet.A balance diet need to containcarbohydrate
protein
fat
vitamins
minerals salts and fibre.These are important to our body.If there is not enough protein
you will not be able to grow properly and you will not be able to repair yourself . If you do not have enough energy containing foods you will feel very tired
you will not have enough energy. If you have too much energy containing foods you will bee overweight. Be the way
we need to sleep for about at less 7 hours everyday.If we don't sleep enough
we don't have enough energy to work or go to school.Do you sleep st 7 hours everyday? To be healthy
we need to be happy
too!Happy can make us be more happy.Why?When we are happy person
we always eat in a correct way. How about you?Do you have healthy life?If not
do it now! 2010-01-11 16:41:38 补充： thank you that you correct my mistakes.I will correct it^^
参考: it is less that 200 words= =
功课系应该自己做的，叫人帮你做，只会害了自己。
as741852963n 的文中有些非常不小心的错误。漏了S (fats
carbohydrates)
漏了d (balanced diet)
错将名词用作形容词...... 如果改改这些错误的话
文章本身是不错的.