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英语高手请帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误吗

英语高手请帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误吗，或者有表达错误，用词不当等等，请一一指出谢谢
just now my mother sent me a message that my family has gone to my grandma's house to enjoy the mid-autumn day.and i woundn't go because it is too far away .so i will enjoy it myself or with my friends.my friend said he has sent aome mooncakes to me .but i haven't received yet.where and how will i enjoy the day.i am hoping its coming.i remembered the year befor last year,i spent the day with my best friend D of colledge.we went out and talked about our feelings and some interesting things.that's a good feeling .i will remember that forever.i cherish the memory of the day in my home.and i cherish the smell of mooncakes in the fridge.it is a different kind of taste.and it be feeled only in your family.that tastes mixed with the favour of family and love.but this time i can't enjoy it ,because i don't have a fridge.and just now i watched my show.and it said that they will have autumn programs on sunday.i like shanghai tv.and i think many stars from my show will come to the program.and i think i will enjoy it .for that it is my favourite program.and maybe i can watch it with eating the mooncakes.it is funny.happy mid-autumn's day.my ralatives,my friends and my catty.

Answer 1

a message （saying）that my families 。。。
family 是家庭，families -家庭成员
wouldn't 和 couldm't 不同意思，你这里的语境应该是要couldn't
i'm hoping its coming - 语法没错，但表达不清，都不知道你要说什么
the year before last （后面那个year 不用）
D from college
feel 错 - feel，felt
watch it （while）eating 。。

Answer 2

message that - message saying that
has gone - had gone
enjoy the mid-autumn day - spend Mid-Autumn Festival
wouldn't go - didn't (want to) go
enjoy it myself - spend it by myself
has sent - had sent
received yet - received them yet
where and how will i enjoy the day.i am hoping its coming. - Wherever and however I'm going to spend it, I'm still looking forward to the festival.
remembered - remember
my best friend D of colledge - my best friend from college, D
memory - memories
the day in my home ?????
it be feeled only in your family - it can only be felt in a family
tastes mixed - taste is mixed
favour of family ????
can't enjoy - won't be able to enjoy
watched - was watching
will - would
my show ???
autumn porgrams ????
shanghai tv - the TV shows in Shanghai
many stars from my show will come to the program ???
with eating the mooncakes - while eating mooncakes
ia funny - will be fun
mid-autumn day - Mid-Autumn Festival
catty ????

Answer 3

标准来说 句号后面 新的一句话 不能用and so一些单词开头(第二行)
一些打字还是写错了 colledge college

Answer 4

pretty good essay

一些极小的问题：

每一个标调的前面没空格，但后面一定空一格。
. But i woundn't go
it is a different taste

Answer 5

no