Question

帮我看看下列英语短文有语法错误吗

Happiness is good for me, happiness is my family in my side, we had a great time. This is photo of my elders, they each smiled, this is what I really want to see. Once, my mother personally cooking dinner for me to eat, of course, she didn't know how to cook, although the mother cook not how good, but I am very happy, because I tasted the taste of mother. What is happiness? Happiness is when you feel the warmth, that moment, is called happiness！
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Answer 1

happiness is my family in my side 不对 不知道你要表达什么
This is photo of my elders, they each smiled没有a ， 不能用each 用all
my mother personally cooking dinner for me to eat, of course cooking改成cooked
although the mother cook not how good改成although my mother didnot cook well
but I am very happy, 不能加but i was
because I tasted the taste of mother意思是 我尝到了妈妈的味道 你煮了她？
is called happiness！省去 语法不对 意思重复

追问

第一句我想表达家人在我身边是幸福的
第六句我想表达我尝到了妈妈爱的味道

追答

happiness is having my family around me
because i tasted the love of my mum

Answer 2

Happiness is good for me. Happiness is that my family is in my side. We have a great time staying together. This is a photo of my elders:each them smiled. This is what I really want to see. Once, my mother personally cooked dinner for me to eat. Of course, she didn't know how to cook. Although my mother doesn't cook very well, I am very happy. I tasted the taste from my mother. What is happiness? Happiness is when you feel the warmth, in that moment, that is called happiness！
（although和but不能连用）

Answer 3

although but 不能连用