Question

英语大神进来帮忙看看这篇文章有没有什么语法错误，大错误什么的，谢！

急！！！好的给满分！在线等！这篇文章是写动漫的：
Animation
Animation,It is Indispensable in our life ,It can give us confidence, courage . Can letus be happy , be moved.
经过各位大神的提醒，改了，又新增了一些内容进去，再请各位大神帮忙看看，对了怎么能比较像初中学生写的呢？
Animation began at the start of the 20th century, J. Stuart Blackton ,he is the father of modern animation ,he make the first Animation in the world .Now , Animation is became better and better , People around the world began to pay attention to animation,because animation can let the children receive education.

Answer 1

按照你的内容帮你改一下。
Animation, which is now indispensable in our life, can give us both confidence and courage. It can make us happy and moved as well.

追问

谢，我还没发完，等会再有劳你了，再加一点什么内容好呢？

追答

Animation started at the beginning of the 20th century by J. Stuart Blackton, known as the father of modern animation. He made the first Animation in the world. Now, Animation is becoming better and better. People around the world have begun to pay attion to it because it can help children with their education.
最后一句帮助小孩得到教育这句好像意思不大对，不过我还是照你给的改的。

Answer 2

Animation is indispensable in our life which can give us confidence and courage.Thus we can be moved or feel happy watching it.
这是改正后的

Answer 3

没有语法错误大错误什么的也没有
写的很好！

Answer 4

Can let us be happy , be moved. 修改为 Can make us be happy , be moved.