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第一篇你好，我的名字是丹娜。我在淘宝上卖小物件。像公仔，玻璃杯这些年轻人喜欢的东西。举个例子，你可以在情人节的时候买个公仔送给你的女朋友，我相信她会喜欢的。基于这个心理，...
第一篇
你好，我的名字是丹娜。我在淘宝上卖小物件。像公仔，玻璃杯这些年轻人喜欢的东西。举个例子，你可以在情人节的时候买个公仔送给你的女朋友，我相信她会喜欢的。基于这个心理，我创办了网店。在一开始的时候，采办小物件没有花费太多的钱。然而知道你店铺的人很少，所以很少有人买你的东西。但我没有沮丧，我在想办法让更多的人知道我的店铺。低价销售是很好的方法，可以让更多的人知道你的店铺，并且买你的东西。然而有一段时间我的店铺是亏本的。但是现在，越来越多的人知道我的店铺了。所以，我认为，销售技巧是很重要的。
Hello, my name is Dana, an online shop owner.
I sell some young people’s like on taboo. such as dolls,glass.
For example, you can buy a doll for Valentine’s Day toyour girlfriend, I am sure she will love it.
Based on the psychological, I set up shop.
In the beginning, procurement small objects withoutspending too much money.
But very few people know that you store, so few people tobuy your things.
But I'm not dispirited; I was to find a way to let morepeople know my shop.
Low-priced sales is very good method can get morepotential customers.
But you have to be careful, my shop is at a loss for aperiod of time.
But now, an increasing number of people know my shop.
So, I guess, when you set up shop in taboo, sales skillsis very significant.
第二篇
一月七号，我们将开展一个新员工会议。欢迎200名新入职的员工以及让他们更加深入地了解公司是这次会议的主题。
On January 7th, we will conduct a new employee meeting.
Welcome 200 new employees, and make them more in-depthunderstanding of the company is the theme of the meeting.
我想我们需要一个宽阔的场地和各种各样的设备，比如麦克风。
I think we need a broad space and a variety of equipment,such as the microphone.
当然，我们要考虑到预算和交通。最后，会议的地点在星星大酒店。
Of course, we should consider the budgetand transportation.
Finally, the location of the conference in the starhotel.
在这个会议上，我们准备了激动人心的演讲。新员工会知道，公司十分重视新员工以及期待他们对公司的贡献。
At this meeting, we prepared a stirring speech.
New employees will know, the company attaches greatimportance to them and look forward to their contribution to the company.
然而，我们要尽可能避免讨论消极话题，因为这不利于活跃气氛。
However, we willtalk as much as possible to avoid negative topic, because it is bad for dynamicatmosphere.
最后，我们可以总结，在组织会议的过程中，规划是非常重要的。
Finally, we can conclude, in the process of organizingmeetings, planning is very. Significant.
比较急，满意的话我会提高悬赏，财富值大大的有T~T 跪求大神啊 展开
你好，我的名字是丹娜。我在淘宝上卖小物件。像公仔，玻璃杯这些年轻人喜欢的东西。举个例子，你可以在情人节的时候买个公仔送给你的女朋友，我相信她会喜欢的。基于这个心理，我创办了网店。在一开始的时候，采办小物件没有花费太多的钱。然而知道你店铺的人很少，所以很少有人买你的东西。但我没有沮丧，我在想办法让更多的人知道我的店铺。低价销售是很好的方法，可以让更多的人知道你的店铺，并且买你的东西。然而有一段时间我的店铺是亏本的。但是现在，越来越多的人知道我的店铺了。所以，我认为，销售技巧是很重要的。
Hello, my name is Dana, an online shop owner.
I sell some young people’s like on taboo. such as dolls,glass.
For example, you can buy a doll for Valentine’s Day toyour girlfriend, I am sure she will love it.
Based on the psychological, I set up shop.
In the beginning, procurement small objects withoutspending too much money.
But very few people know that you store, so few people tobuy your things.
But I'm not dispirited; I was to find a way to let morepeople know my shop.
Low-priced sales is very good method can get morepotential customers.
But you have to be careful, my shop is at a loss for aperiod of time.
But now, an increasing number of people know my shop.
So, I guess, when you set up shop in taboo, sales skillsis very significant.
第二篇
一月七号，我们将开展一个新员工会议。欢迎200名新入职的员工以及让他们更加深入地了解公司是这次会议的主题。
On January 7th, we will conduct a new employee meeting.
Welcome 200 new employees, and make them more in-depthunderstanding of the company is the theme of the meeting.
我想我们需要一个宽阔的场地和各种各样的设备，比如麦克风。
I think we need a broad space and a variety of equipment,such as the microphone.
当然，我们要考虑到预算和交通。最后，会议的地点在星星大酒店。
Of course, we should consider the budgetand transportation.
Finally, the location of the conference in the starhotel.
在这个会议上，我们准备了激动人心的演讲。新员工会知道，公司十分重视新员工以及期待他们对公司的贡献。
At this meeting, we prepared a stirring speech.
New employees will know, the company attaches greatimportance to them and look forward to their contribution to the company.
然而，我们要尽可能避免讨论消极话题，因为这不利于活跃气氛。
However, we willtalk as much as possible to avoid negative topic, because it is bad for dynamicatmosphere.
最后，我们可以总结，在组织会议的过程中，规划是非常重要的。
Finally, we can conclude, in the process of organizingmeetings, planning is very. Significant.
比较急，满意的话我会提高悬赏，财富值大大的有T~T 跪求大神啊 展开
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Though its summer holiday，I still have little time to do some things out of study.Besides to do the endless homework,I have to play the piano for at least one hour every day.When I try to tell my mother that I want to go camping with my friends for a rest，she gets very angry . I know that it is very important for our students to study hard. I also konw that the more knowledge I grasp，the more powerful I will be.However, the meaning of knowledge is very wide,it not only konwledge on the book ,but also knowledge out of book.
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