Question

求英语学霸帮我写作文，急~

Answer 1

i am a student of an vocational institution. i have quite a lot interests such as reading at my spare time and playing basketball after school. on every saturday i am used to swim and on sunday i would like to do some mountain climbing with my parents.
in my daily life, i am very interested in english and computers, both of which are very useful for me.and sometimes i would play computer games ,but not too much. and i like to attend the english corner in my school.
my favourite hobby is stamp-collection, which bring me much fun and benefit. now, i have got nearly 10000 stamps. is it amazing?
although i have to spend much time on my study, i don't want to give up all these hobbies i have. because of them my life is colorful and exciting.

追问

这个不行

我找过这篇

追答

I am a vocational college student. I have many hobbies. I usually read some books and magazines. I will play basketball with my classmates when I am going to school, I will go swimming on Saturday, and sometimes I will climb mountains with my parents on weekends.
I am particularly interested in English and computer, because they are useful for me.
My biggest hobby is collecting stamps, because it makes sense to me, and it has a great collection value.
These interests and hobbies will make my life more colorful.
求采纳，很费脑子，具体我也不知道你是多大的学生，所以有些语法没敢用

追问

😂感觉太多了而且怕老师发现我抄答案的

😂

追答

你害怕的话，可以在第一段适当的减几句