Question

急！帮我用英语翻译一篇周记

第一次写英语周记，感觉挺不错。但我的英语水平那么差，我想一定写得很糟糕吧。我很想学好英语，并且能说一口流利的英语，那样就可以和外国人对话了。但我总是很懒惰，所以学不好。确实如此（exactly），不努力又怎么能学好呢？我决定（determine）了！我一定要把英语学好！制定一个英语学习计划，但我需要别人的帮助，噢！英语老师应该能给我一些好的建议。
好吧~我写一篇让你们把错的修改~
first time to writing a weekdiary in English. fell soso（是不错的意思吗？- -不要翻译成感觉很好啊.）I think that i certainl very bad to writing.I want to study English well . I maybe talk to native English speakers If i can speak English is fluently.but i always so lazy.exactly，how can learning well if you don’t work hart？I was determine！I must to study English vary well! I’m ready to making studyplan for English，but I need to some one else‘s help, oh! English teacher should be able to give me some good advice.

Answer 1

真想学的话，你写个草稿，让大家帮你修改，提高很快的

----今天我怎么到处讲废话，都没想这赚分

first time to writing a weekdiary in English. fell soso（是不错的意思吗？- -不要翻译成感觉很好啊.）I think that i certainl very bad to writing.I want to study English well . I maybe talk to native English speakers If i can speak English is fluently.but i always so lazy.exactly，how can learning well if you don’t work hart？I was determine！I must to study English vary well! I’m ready to making studyplan for English，but I need to some one else‘s help, oh! English teacher should be able to give me some good advice.

First time to write weekly journal in English. feeling all right（感觉还行）(it doesnt feel too good，感觉不怎么好）. I think that certainly i am bad at writing. I want to study english well. I can probably talk to native english speakers if i can speak english fluently. but i am always so lazy. exactly, how can you learn well if you don't work hard? i was determined! I must study english hard! I am ready to make a study plan for english, but i need to someone else's help. oh! English teacher should be able to give me some good advice.

你写的很不错了，对于初学者。我在修改时主要修改了非常明显的语法错误,对你自己选择的词语和句型没有做大的改动，因为虽然谈不上写的好，但是说的明白人家能懂就是提高写作的第一步。我觉得你可以先把基本的语法练习好，以后在讲究用词造句。因此我改的这篇在别的高手看来也是很初级的写法。但是让你一步提高到如何文学如何地道对你并没有什么太大的帮助。你先对比一下我帮你修改的，语法为什么我改成这样，如果有不懂，再发提问问别人。用词造句可以在你的基本语法比较好的时候再专门的练习各种句型，以及选择更好的词语充分的表达你的思想。你看合适吗？因为我觉得，我自己的英语水平的确要比你高一些，我直接用我的英文写，对你并没什么帮助，你看不到你自己的错误在哪里，也无法一步一步逐步提高。所以希望这种方式能帮助到你。

非常感谢你接受我的意见，非常佩服你学习的决心和毅力。

Answer 2

English for the first time to write a weekly report, I feel pretty good. But my English is so poor, I would like to write some very bad now. I really want to learn English and be able to speak fluent English, and foreigners will be able to do the dialogue. But I always very lazy, learn so bad. This is true, how can they not try to learn it? I am determined! I must learn English! To develop a plan to learn English, but I need the help of others, Oh! English teachers should give me some good suggestions.

Answer 3

第一次写weekdiary英文。下跌索索 我认为我c e rtainl非常糟糕，以w r iting.I想学英语。也许本人谈话母语为英语发言如果我能讲英语是我一向fluently.but如此lazy.exactly ，如何才能学习以及如果你没有工作哈特？我很确定，我必须学习英语有所不同啊！我已经准备好决策studyplan英文，但我需要别人的帮助下，噢！英语教师应该能够给我一些很好的意见。

Answer 4

As the first time to writing a weekdiary,I feel not bad, although I am not good at writing in English.I always look forward to speaking English well so that I can talk with foreigners.But,clearly,no one can study something without hard working.Once,I am so lazy,but I have decided to study English well.I have made a plan for studying,but I also need helping.I will develop my skill of English with the help from my English teacher's advice,I hope.
虽然我不擅长英语写作，但对于这第一次写下英语的文章，还是感觉不错的。我一直期望可以说好英语，这样就可以和外国人交谈了。但是很显然没有人可以不努力就学好任何事。我曾经非常懒惰，但我已经决心学好英语。我制定了一个学习计划，但我仍需帮助。我可以按老师的建议学习并提高英语成绩——我有这样的希望。

Answer 5

First time writes English week to record, feels good. But my English proficiency that misses, I want certainly to write very bad. I very want to learn English, and can say that a fluent English, such might talk with the foreigner. But I am very always lazy, therefore cannot learn. Truly so (can exactly), how not diligently learn? I decided (determine)! I must certainly learn English! Works out an English learning program, but I need others' help, oh! English teacher should be able to give me some good suggestions.