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My favourite pet
My favourrite pets are Husky. They are a kind of dogs.Many years ago,they helped the farmers who are live in the north of the earth to pull their sleds.So they are used to running.Their hairs is black over the whole body but a part of face is white.I like its looks also their mind.I really want to buy one to be my pet,but my mother doesn`t,because she think I was busy with my study.That`s a pity!
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My Favorite Pet
My favorite pet is the husky. Huskies are a kind of dog. They used to help people in the north pull their sleds. So they are very good at running. Most of their bodies is black except part of their faces which is white. I like their looks as well as the way they act. I really want to get one as a pet, but my mother wouldn't let me because she thinks that I'm too busy with my studies to take care of a dog. That's such a shame.
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