Question

帮帮忙，修改下面的英语作文，语法哪里错了，麻烦帮我改一下，谢谢。

Welcome to the Yunnan University of Nationalities Yuhua Campus.I was the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design 3 class Ann.I'm 19 years old.I'm from Yunna of HongHe.I like playing volleyball and play computer games.I was our class league brach secretary.
Now,we are in place is new campus,Yuhua Campus scenery is very beautiful.Look,there is our campus Yuhua lake,another is a row of cherry trees.Since our campus is National University,all the buildings are national style.
The campus is full of green,fresh air,beautiful environment,many students are like here,including me.This is our beautiful campus ,thank you for your coming.
I hope we can become better friends and wish you good health ,happy every day.

Answer 1

I was the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design 3 class Ann.

你以前是那的学生？I am a student of the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design class 3, Ann.

I'm from HongHe of Yunnan province.

是云南吧。

I like playing volleyball and play computer games.
后面也是喜欢吧，也要ing啊。I like playing volleyball and playing computer games.

we are in place is new campus

where we are in the place is new campus.

all the buildings are national style.

all the buildings are in the national style.

many students are like here,

神马。many students like here

I hope we can become better friends

比较什么==I hope we can become good friends

Answer 2

Welcome to the Yannan University of Nationalities Yuhua Campus. I'm Ann, 19 years old, coming from HongHe city of Yunnan, i study in grade 3 of the Art institute of Visual Communication Design. I like playing volleyball and computer games. I am the branch secretary of our class.
We are now in the just place that is our new campus , It's beautiful. You can see the Yuhua lake there and a line of cherry trees. the new campus has been in the national style since our school was founded.
The campus is full of green, fresh air, many students are like here,including me. It is really a wonderful place.
Thanks for your time and I hope we can be good friends each other
Wish you have a good day