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At present, the number of South China tigers has been less and less，and become in danger of dying out. There exsit no more than 400 or so South China tigers in China now. Some people catch and kill the tigers foe money. And the deforestation has destoyed their living environment. I hope our country can create some laws to protect the precious species of tigers and punish the killer. And I also hope that everyone should make an efford to create a happy and peace homeland for us humans and animals to live in .
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At present, South China tigers has been less and less，and become in danger of dying out. There exsit no more than 400 or so South China tigers in China now. Some people catch and kill the tigers for money. And the deforestation has destoyed their living environment. I hope our country can create some laws to protect the precious species of tigers and punish the killer. And I also hope that everyone should make an efford to create a happy and peace homeland for us humans and animals to live in .
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