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Einstein, a unique scientist
Albert Einstein was considered the greatest scientist of the 20th century and enjoy great prestige in the world. And both his achievements and qualities made him unique.
When young,Einstein's intellect was stirred by his curiosity and sharp minds. For instance, at age 5, his father brought him a compass he had never seen before. Then as he found however he could fool it into pointing off in a new direction, try as he might, the needle would always find its way back finally. Sharp as his mind was, he thus sensed that there was more to our world than meets the eye, which motivated him and resulted in his extraordinary accomplishments.
What's more, his success similarly had something to do with his intense belief of simplicity, which probably was the real power of his genius. So he sought the goodliness of simplicity in the complicated nature, discovering the gospel that escaped others. It was his persistence to keep pushing for simplicity that made him unique!
All in all, Einstein is beyond all doubt a giant in science owing to his unique character. So I deem could we learn from him will we become "Einsteins". 展开
Albert Einstein was considered the greatest scientist of the 20th century and enjoy great prestige in the world. And both his achievements and qualities made him unique.
When young,Einstein's intellect was stirred by his curiosity and sharp minds. For instance, at age 5, his father brought him a compass he had never seen before. Then as he found however he could fool it into pointing off in a new direction, try as he might, the needle would always find its way back finally. Sharp as his mind was, he thus sensed that there was more to our world than meets the eye, which motivated him and resulted in his extraordinary accomplishments.
What's more, his success similarly had something to do with his intense belief of simplicity, which probably was the real power of his genius. So he sought the goodliness of simplicity in the complicated nature, discovering the gospel that escaped others. It was his persistence to keep pushing for simplicity that made him unique!
All in all, Einstein is beyond all doubt a giant in science owing to his unique character. So I deem could we learn from him will we become "Einsteins". 展开
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