写作思路:把一天发生的故事写下来。
Today is Sunday. It is nine o'clock in the morning. I'm doing my homework. My mother is cleaning the house. My father is reading newspapers. Grandpa and Grandma are walking in the park. They usually get up early. What a happy family!
今天是星期天,现在是上午九点。我正在做家庭作业。妈妈在打扫屋子,爸爸在看报纸,爷爷奶奶在公园散步,他们通常起得很早。多么幸福的一家人啊!
具体如下:
Now I look at the place where my right hand was beaten by the wooden strip. It seems that I can still see its discontent and crying. It was as if I saw Mr. Han, whose anger was written on his face that day.
我现在看着右手当初被木条打的地方,仿佛还能看到它在不满,在哭诉。仿佛看到了那天愤怒两字都写在脸上的韩老师。
After class, Mr. Han walked into the classroom gracefully and calmly, holding several exercise books in one hand and slender wooden strips in the other. I stared at the piece of wood and began to love my hand.
上课了,只见韩老师优雅地、从容地走进教室,一手拿着几本练习册,一手握着细长的木条。我愣愣地盯着那根木条,已经开始心疼自己的手了。
2018-08-30
今天是星期天,现在是上午九点。我正在做家庭作业。妈妈在打扫屋子,爸爸在看报纸,爷爷奶奶在公园散步,他们通常起得很早。多么幸福的一家人啊!
妞妞走进教室,迎面走来了她的语文老师。“妞妞,你昂起头来真美!”老师爱抚地拍拍她的肩说。
那一天,妞妞得到了许多人的赞美。她想:一定是蝴蝶结的功劳!可回到家往镜前一照,咦,她头上根本就没有蝴蝶结,一定是从饰物店出来时与人相撞弄掉了。
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