Question

2015辽宁沈阳高三质检一短文改错为啥这样改

Answer 1

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
　　增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
　　删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
　　修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
　　注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
　　Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
　　二、Correction 2(2014课标全国Ⅱ)
　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
　　增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
　　删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
　　修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
　　注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
　　My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
　　My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

Answer 2

作文建议自己写，因为作文是语文的基础，在高中以下的语文都是为大学打基础，因为作文是论文的基础，大学需要写很多论文。

一、写作是语文的综合积累，写作能力的提高意味着语文基础的扎实。
二、学好作文是升学考试的需要。作文=1/2，随着新课标的推行，作文越来越受到重视。90%初中高中尖子生们，都有较强的阅读和写作能力。甚至有专家预言：未来中高考中，语文只考读写。现在，好多孩子都在学习各种才艺，其实家长之所以花力气培养孩子的各种特长，就是为了在考取好学校时多个筹码，随着这个政策的出台，家长和学生有没想过，有写作特长也可顺利进入理想学校。上初中后就在没什么时间去学习写作，学好写作从娃娃抓起。从小打好基础。
三、学好作文，有过硬的文笔，将是未来就业的基础及途径。有良好的文笔功底，可以成就自己的事业。比如专业写作、自由撰稿人、制片人等。有过硬文笔，就业渠道更宽泛。如律师业、广告业、策划业，甚至向我们的作文指导培训……从方便生活角度来讲，无论在任何单位，从事任何职业，都会受到重视。