Question

英语作文修改

Answer 1

第一行，image错误，应为imagine，v.意为想象。will 与 our life 顺序错误，应为our life will，宾语从句要用陈述语序。第二行，first没有ly。first既是数词也是副词。are try错误，应为are trying，现在进行时结构为be doing。第三行，invant拼写错误，应为invent。doesn't错误，which先行词是复数，应为don't。第四行it错误，drive的宾语是which，不需加宾语。第七行population错误，意为人口，应为Pollution，意为污染。第八行mechine错误，如果你想表示药则为medicine，如果是机器就是machine。第九行alive错误。forever，adv.意为永远地，修饰名词，应为live。

Answer 2

第一句话image 应改为imagine ，后面是宾语从句，应用陈述句语序，即：what our life will be like...

追答

第二句are后不能接原形动词 try，应该改为trying ，发明应该是 invent , which 后的doesn’t 应该改成don’t, 因为主语是复数 cars。同样drive 后的it改为them。
without 后应该是drivers。
第七行：will 后不能接don’t ，应改don’t 为not。population 前加上the rising population 。
第八行：机器拼错，应是machine。
第十行：come true 中true 拼错。
倒数第二行：不是project ，应改为subjects 学科。to改为 and。

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Answer 3

Let's imagine what our life will be in the future. Firstly, scientists are trying to invent the cars which doesn't need someone to drive it. So in the future, people will take cars without drivers. Next, people will live under the sea in ten years. Then we will not have the problem about pollution. Finally, we will have a medicine to make people alive forever. But if we want to make the dreams come true, we need to work hard and get good marks in the projects to make our life better in the future.