Question

在线等英语短文改错 共十处 急急急！

My sister Sarah was born with a bone missing on her left foot.She can't walk like ordinary people.One day she came home and told me she has competed in the field day.There were a lot of races.I thought of she must have failed,and my minds raced as I tried to offer encouragement.So before I couldn say anything,she said:"IJohn,i won two of the races!" I couldn't believe!Because of her illness,she appears particular weak.I thought she must have been giving a head start.Again,before I could say anything,he said:"I didn't get a head start.I just tried hard than others!"

Answer 1

My sister Sarah was born with a bone missing on【in】 her left foot.She can't walk like ordinary people.One day she came home and told me she has【had】 competed in the field day.There were a lot of races.I thought of【of 去掉】 she must have failed,and my minds【mind】 raced as I tried to offer encouragement.So【But】 before I couldn say anything,she said:"IJohn,i won two of the races!" I couldn't believe【it】!Because of her illness,she appears particular【particularly】 weak.I thought she must have been giving【given】 a head start.Again,before I could say anything,he【she】 said:"I didn't get a head start.I just tried hard【harder】 than others!"

Answer 2

1. on her foot:in her foot
   

2. has competed:had cpmpeted

3. thought of:去掉of

4. minds：mind
   

5. offer：give

6. so：but

7. giving：given

8. particular：too
   

9. he：she

10. hard：harder

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Answer 3

1. has competed 改成had competed

2. thought of 改成 thought

3. so 改成 but

4. particular改成particularly