Question

求这篇英语改错

Answer 1

第2行:victims--the victims
第2行:taking--taken
第3行:seriously--serious
第3行:crossroads--crossroad
第3行:that--which
第4行:去掉by
第4行:has--had
第5行:starting--started
第6行:was--were
第6行:Someone--Anyone

Answer 2

On Friday night, Menlo Park police responded to several reports of shots (shooting) just after 8 pm. When they arrived at the spot they found four people suffering from gunshot wounds. All of victims were (are) adult males and were taking to the Stanford Medical Center for treatment. Two were in good condition, the other two in seriously (serious) condition. The shooting happened near a crossroads(crossroad), that (where) is not far from the Facebook Headquarters, also close by(去掉by) to Belle Haven Elementary School. It was not clear (that) what has caused the shooting. Witnesses said the group was standing in a front yard when two cars drove by and starting(started) firing. The two vehicles seen fleeing the scene was（were） descirbed as a black Honda and a black Acura. Someone with(has) information about this incident is asked to contact the Menlo Park Police Department at (650) 330-6300.