Question

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The colleges in my country are different from the colleges of the United States. Let me show one college of my country contract with one college of the Unites States to you. It named Art college in my country. City college of San Francisco is American.
In the Art College every student's ages are 17 to 22. I'm sure you can't find anyone who is over 22 years old. second, you must study in this college for three years to graduate. Also, you can take part in a test to transfer a four-year university after you finish three years in this college. The college uses final grade to see record of studies of students.
In city college of san francisco, everywhere you can see the students have any age, even some students who are 80 years old. In this college, as long as you achieve requirement of graduate or transfer to a four-year university, you can graduate or transfer. They don't mind how much time you spend. If you study hard, maybe one-half years, you can graduate or transfer.
To sum it all up, there are many different between Art college and city college of San Francisco.
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Answer 1

我的专业是英语，算不上高手~不知如下修改能否让你满意~但我尽力了~也许有些地方不是很理解你原来的意思，做了些改动~请见谅~希望能给你提供帮助~
The colleges in my country are different from those of the United States. Let me set Art College and City College of San Francisco as a sample,of which the former one is in my country while the later one is in America,to make you understand better.
In Art College ,the ages of the students range from 17 to 22. I'm sure you cannot find anyone who is over 22 years old there. And you must study in this college for three years to make your graduation. It is true that you can take part in an examination to get a chance of four years'further study there after you finish the former three years,but it will takes you a lot of time.What's more, the college takes the students' final grades as a criterion to judge their studies.
However,in City College of San Francisco, you can find the students of any age, even ones who are 80 years old. In this college, as long as you accord with the requirements of graduation or those of getting a chance of another four years' further study, you can make it. What the school really cares about is not the time you spent,but your ability.And whether you can do it or not just depends on yourself. If you study hard, maybe in one-half years, you can graduate or make a further study.
To sum up, there are a lot of differences between our native colleges and the colleges of the America.

Answer 2

没错

Answer 3

难啊！