Question

高一英语作文 我的第一个朋友

Answer 1

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My friend．

I have a good friend． His name is Sun Linshan． He is a pupil． He is 12 years old． We are about the same age． He has many hobbies．

He likes playing football， swimming， playing computer games and so on． He often plays football with me on weekends． He is good at English． But I didn＇t．

So he often helps me with my English． He is a clever boy． We are good friends forever．

英语作文技巧：

1、第一个要统一的人，写了很多东西，一开始还是我，然后变成我们应该，然后变成你应该，这种变化必须终止。

2、时态应该统一，过去式或现在时，而不是过去式或现在时，当然，虚拟语气和其他东西。

3、少用简单句，即每个句子都以“我”开头。

4、 使用长句，也就是说，试着把短句组合在一起组成长句。在中间使用经典的衔接词。

Answer 2

My friend.
I have a good friend. His name is Sun Linshan.  He is a primary school. He is 12 years old. We are the same age. He has a lot of hobbies. He likes playing football, going swimming, playing computer games and so on. He often plays football with me at the weekends. He is good at English. but I don t. So he often helps me with my English. He is a smart boy. We ll be good friends forever.