英语作文，帮我找找有没有语法错误？
帮你改好了，并重新写好了，希望对你有帮助。
第二段第二句语法不对。
第三段第二句谓语动词不对，第三句语法不对。
第三段第三句要怎么改呢
我改了一下
您好，希望您能早日找回物品。
没有大问题，但有不少小问题。看了第一句就有小错误了。不需要the，而且3后面要有3rd，等等，我就不一一指出。我直接把我改好的发出来。
Lost and Found
On September 3rd, 2019, I lost a Samsung digital camera in the English reading room A on the 4th floor of the new library in our university.
The camera can be described as follows. It looks new and the color is the same as the black leather coat. What is more, it has similar size of a cake and similar weight as a mobile phone.
This camera is a birthday present from my best friend, so losing it makes me very upset. Anyone who finds it please contact me at 123456 from 19:00 to 22:00 or email me at 12345@123.com.
Thank you very much! I really appreciate your help.
我不知道你是真的要找东西，还是在修改作文。如果你是真的要修改东西，可以换个方式写，写更直白一些：
标题可以直接写成『丢失了相机』，这样让人更容易清楚你要找的东西。
Lost A Digital Camera
It’s a birthday present from my best friend. Losing it makes me extremely upset. So please, anyone who finds it, please contact me!
Here are some details of how I lost the camera:
Date: September 3rd, 2019
Place: the English reading room A on the 4th floor of the new library
Camera brand: Samsung
Color: black
Condition: new
Size: similar size as a cake
Weight: similar as a mobile phone
My Mobile phone: 12345 (available from 19:00 to 22:00)
My Emial: 12344@123.com
Thank you very much! I really appreciate your help.
