Question

The Hot Summer

Answer 1

「要求」

　　从春夏秋冬中任选一个季节，描写其特色，要求抓住特点，描写具体生活内。字数150—200字。

　　「范文」

　　The Hot Summer

　　The hot weather is unbearable. People can only enjoy a little coolness early at dawn and late at night. Once the sun has risen there is no relief： at once the heat begins. Walking in the burning sunshine becomes torturing and wearying.

　　Perhaps it would be all right if you could stay inside your house and keep fairly cool. But you simply do not have the luck， and have to go out， as most people must do. Then you can't help but feel the power of the blazing sun.

　　Sometimes the heat might be very fierce， like the blast of a furnace. The heat gets more and more in tense until about six o'clock in the afternoon， when the sun sets down in the west.

　　But a hot summer day is not without charm. If you get up before dawn，you may take a pleasant walk. You will see there is just a faint light in the eastern sky and the stars are beginning to fade. A cool breeze blows and the birds are just walking. The grass is cool， the shadowy trees are rustling their leaves， and the air is full of fragrances. Then you will have enjoyed the best.

　　「评语」

　　文章细致入微地勾画了一个炎热的夏季，尤其是第二部分淋漓尽致地描述了汗流浃背的感觉，让人不禁想起语文课本里的骆驼祥子。