Question

英语高手来！！

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现在写了一部分了，请英语高手来看看有没有语法错误，有没有帮忙可以改进的地方。帮忙改善一下。

分数很多 ，改得好的才给！

Today,I want to talk sth about the earthquake.Since the disaster happened, many friends of my age had lost their family and their houses.I felt very sad when I had known lots of people who had died.There were lots of children even babys be an orphan child.Their parents died in this disaster.Everyone not only Chinese but also foreigners donates money to the worst-hit children.And many foreigners because this earthquake , had known lots of history of Chinese.o I'd like to ask all of my classmates to donate for them.And I wish they can live a happy life in the future.

Answer 1

and their houses删去
I had known改成I knew
baby的复数是babies
be an orphan child改成became orphan children
And many foreigners because this earthquake , had known lots of history of Chinese.改成And because this earthquake，many foreignershad known lots of history of Chinese。
ask改成advise that

Answer 2

have lost
their parents or relatives and their houses
knew
lots of people had died
lots of children even babies became orphan children
including Chinese and foreigners
because of this earthquake
of China
Here I advise that all of my classmates dedicate your love.
as usual

Answer 3

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