Question

※※高中英语作文求批改※※（有加分哦！！！）

高二英语作文求批改 ※ 相当急！！！
必须要有批改或指点啊！！！ 谢了 好的话有加分※
My Learning Experience
I am an art school student and I’m grade 2,I always show great skill at drawing,Ilove painting as rats love rice.
I always thought it’s great that if I were an American,the reason why I thought that is it’s too difficult for me to learn English,becouse I have no idea about what I should learn,this problem has troubled me for many years.it was my biggest headache.I have been asked English teachers on the Internet and many teachers think that it’s important to recie grammers and wards,some teachers think the way to prictice our oral English is important,a few teachers think that do lots of homework and exercises can help improve our English…
These ways both good ,but those are not for me,becouse I’v had enough of boring grammers and lifeless wards,if I do lots of exercises,I will death I think. What is the best way of learning English? Not long
ago,I came out the best anwser—reading and writing.
The harder you worke,the more progress you make.So reading lots of English articles and take in the uesful point,as time passed, you’ll even more knowledgeable.Learning must be done by a person himself. writing as important as reading,I think anyone which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.Let’s shouting: anything is possible!

Answer 1

I am a grade 2 art student,I am extremely good at drawing,I enjoyed painting very much.
注意，那个老鼠爱大米在英语里是不那么用的。。因为英国人不觉得老鼠爱大米，所以他们会不懂你在写什么。

Iam always dreaming to be an American, so I can speak and write English flurentely without putting in so much effort . Due to the fact i have huge difficulties to learn English. This problem has troubled me for many years.it has caused me horrible headache.I have asked my English teachers through the Internet. As some teachers think that it’s important to memorise the grammer and verble, some believe good oral English comes first,and a few suggest me to do lots of homework and exercises in order to help me improve English…

These suggestions are all good,however none of them suits me, due to the fact i have tired of memorising boring grammers and lifeless verble. I believe I will be dead if I do lots of exercises.I am wondering What is the best way for me to learn English?
Not long ago,I came out my best solution which are reading and writing.
The harder you write,the more progress you can make.With reading lots of English articles and take in the uesful point.
As time passed, you’ll learn even more knowledgeable.
Learning must be done by yourself. The writing is as important as reading,I think anyone who is blind at this point will pay a heavy price.
Let’s shouting: anything is possible!

嘻嘻。。你写的还okay哦，，只是有些地方写的不够英语，有很多我帮你改的地方，是你句子本身没有错，但是在英文里，不会那么讲，就是所谓的中式英文，不是英式英文。
有些句子，把你rearrange了一下，让读的人会舒服很多。。。

希望你会喜欢咯。。有问题的话，可以再问我咯。。

Answer 2

有部分语法错误，你看看吧，希望有帮助：

My Learning Experience
I am an art school student.I studied in grade 2,I can show a great skill at drawing,I love

painting as dog loves bones.
I have been thought it’s great that if I were an American, that is because it’s too

difficult to learn English for me,I have no idea about how I can learn it well,this is the

big problem which has been troubled for me many years.I have been asked English teachers on

the Internet and others.some of them thinks that the best way is to prictice our oral

English,and some one thinks that it must do lots of homework and exercises.
These ways both good ,but not for me,becouse I’v had enough of boring grammers and

lifeless wards,if I do more exercises,I will ill I think. What is the best way of learning

English?
some days before,I came out the best anwser is reading and writing.
The more you worked,the better you take.So reading lots of English articles and taking in

the uesful points.As times passed, you’ll even more knowledgeable.
"Learning must be done by himself." It's ture that writing is as important as reading,I

think anyone whom is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.
Remembering that everthing is possible!