Question

帮我翻译一段英语

“同学们好，很高兴站在这个讲台上，因为这是我第一次用英语面对全班同学说话.
我的英语很差（或不是很好），但是今天我试着要用英语跟大家说几句话：
陈夏琪，你的英语很棒；
余燕丽，你的写作很棒，我很羡慕（Envy）；
郭嘉欣，你很漂亮，也很幸福（Happiness）；
徐惠珊，你也很漂亮；
陈长皓，你很英俊（Handsome）；
袁士凯，你的足球很棒；
罗振坤，你很强壮（Strong）；
王德立，好朋友；
朱华忠，你很黑（black）；
陈佩斯，你的同桌（deskmate）很可爱（lovely）；
肖宇坛，好兄弟（Brother）；
黄炫霖，你很正直（honest）；
周裔彬，有时间一起回去我们的家乡（hometown）——陆丰；
老师，我的好老师！
今天我很开心，因为我第一次用英语跟大家聊天.
我说得还可以吗？
谢谢！你们的掌声在哪里？”

麻烦英语高手们了，不要用金山词霸什么的哦！
能不能口语化一点？

Answer 1

Hello everyone!I am glad to stand here because this is the first time for me to talk with all my classmates. Though my English is very poor, I will try my best in English .
陈夏琪,your English is very good.
余燕丽,I envy you because your writing so cool~
郭嘉欣,you are so beautiful and so happiness；
徐惠珊,you are beautiful too
陈长皓，you are very handsome.
袁士凯，you play football so good
罗振坤，you are strong
王德立，you are my good friend
朱华忠，you are black
陈佩斯，your deskmate is very lovely；
肖宇坛，you are my brother；
黄炫霖，you are so honest
周裔彬，when we have time we can go back to our hometown which named --陆丰
老师， my dear teacher！

I'm so happy today because this is the frist time for me to talk with all my friends in English.
How about my speaking?
Thanks all my friends, Where are your applause?

希望你合用哟～

Answer 2

hello, everyone. i'm glad to stand here. it's my first time to speak english in front of you. My Enlish is poor, but i'll try today.
Chen Xiaqi, your english is great.
余燕丽, your English writing is very cool, I envy you .
郭嘉欣，you're so beatiful and also quite happy.
徐惠珊, you're also very pretty
陈长皓，you're very handsome
袁士凯，your football is terrific.
罗振坤，you're very Strong）；
王德立，my good friend
朱华忠，you look very black
陈佩斯，your deskmate is very cute/ lovely ；
肖宇坛，Buddy Purple (不用brother)
黄炫霖，you're very honest）；
周裔彬，let's go back to our hometown (LU FENG) together if we both have time；
(英文里不叫"teacher"..你就叫"Mr./ Miss..") my dear teacher.
today i'm very happy, because it's my first time to talk with you in English.
did I say well?
thanks. Please give me some clapps.

Answer 3

Hello,everyone! I am honored to stand here and this is my first time to present you in English. My English is poor. however, I will try my best to talk to you in English.

陈夏琪: Your English is good.
余燕丽: you are excellent in writing, I really admire you.
郭嘉欣: You are beautiful and happy.
徐惠珊: you are a beautiful girl, too.
陈长皓: you are extremely handsome.

袁士凯: you are good at palying football.
罗振坤: you are a strong man.
王德立: my intimate friend
朱华忠：you are a blackamoor
陈佩斯: you have a lovely deskmate
肖宇坛: my fellow pal
黄炫霖: you are an honest guy
周裔彬: let's go back to our hometown if we are available.
Teacher, my dear teacher!
I am quite happy today for I talked with my fellow classmates in English for the first time.
did I present myself accurately ?
Thank you for listenning. Give me applause. don't you?

Answer 4

hi, everybody, I'm so glad to stand on this platform. because it's my first time to speak English to my whole class mates. My English is not very well, but I still try to speak a few sentences in English:
陈夏琪，your English is grate.
余燕丽，your writing is excellent, I envy you so much.
郭嘉欣，you are pretty and happiness.
徐惠珊，you are pretty too.
陈长皓，you are handsome.
袁士凯，you are good at playing soccer.
罗振坤，you are very strong.
王德立，you are my good friend.
朱华忠，you looks black.
陈佩斯，your deskmate is lovely.
肖宇坛，my good brother.
黄炫霖，you are honest.
周裔彬，Let's go to my hometown----lufeng when we get time.
Teacher, my good teacher!
Today I am so happy because it's my first time to communicate with you guys.
Did I make a good work/job?
Thankyou! Where are your applause?
我的威尼英语的学生，翻译的还标准吧，记得加分哦

Answer 5

hi, everybody, I'm so glad to stand on this platform. because it's my first time to speak English to my whole class mates. My English is not very well, but I still try to speak a few sentences in English:
陈夏琪，your English is grate.
余燕丽，your writing is excellent, I envy you so much.
郭嘉欣，you are pretty and happiness.
徐惠珊，you are pretty too.
陈长皓，you are handsome.
袁士凯，you are good at playing soccer.
罗振坤，you are very strong.
王德立，you are my good friend.
朱华忠，you looks black.
陈佩斯，your deskmate is lovely.
肖宇坛，my good brother.
黄炫霖，you are honest.
周裔彬，Let's go to my hometown----lufeng when we get time.
Teacher, my good teacher!
Today I am so happy because it's my first time to communicate with you guys.
Did I make a good work/job?
Thankyou! Where are your applause?
给你翻译完了，记得把分加上啊