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in the Beijing Olympic games,Liuxiang had quited his race.that makes people in china astonished.there is an investigate that how did people think of that.first,34 percent of the people considered a athlete should finish the race even though he had got injured and about 20 percent of them think healthy is much important than the medal,however,he can take part in the Olympics 4 years later when he is fully recovered.

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in the Beijing Olympic games,Liuxiang quited his race.which makes chinese people astonished.there is an investigate that how people think of that.At first,34 percent of the people considered a athlete should finish the race even though he had got injured but about 20 percent of them think healthy is more important than the medal, moreover,he can take part in the Olympics after 4 years when he fully recovered from his illness