Question

帮忙找一篇英语作文，或者看下我这篇有什么错误

以前一直把这个honesty的作文作为模板作文来背的，现在突然找不到原稿了，如果谁能找到最好。找不到的话就请英语牛人帮我看下一下这篇，是我依稀记得的一些，看看有什么语法啊，单词啊，句型啊什么的错误，帮我修正一下
Honesty
It is undeniable that dishonesty in our society, which does us much harm in many respects, has aroused public concern nowadays.
For example, … and … also … even…
It is unequivocally well known that being honest is beneficial to the people involved. Meanwhile, a sense of honesty build up in other’s heart, which in turn, will earn your true friendship. But it is probably less well known that being honest is equally beneficial to yourself.
Despite the widespread practices of dishonesty. We should take firm step to end this unhealthy trend so as to make the world more beautiful.

时限是下午13：00，因为15：00就要去考试了
一楼这篇显然不是我要找的啊，时间不多开了，我也不想背一篇新的范文了，能找到我要的这篇最好，否则请看看我记得的那些有没有什么错误，我就准备用这篇了

Answer 1

honesty

We often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty. So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy.

It is usually better to be honest than dishonest. People tend to believe an honest man， no matter what he does and what he says. On the contrary， dishonest people are not trustworthy. For this reason， honest people are always more successful than the dishonest. So it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed.

One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience. If a person tells lies， his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster. He will always live in fright.

Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation. All people consider what you've said true and trust you just because you are an honest man. Therefore， you can say what you like and do what you like without fear. You will feel very happy. Likewise， just because of your honesty， people respect you and love you. Gradually， you will gain a good reputation. To be honest will ensure you a happy life.

this is !
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Answer 2

是这个吧
It is undeniable that dishonesty in our society, which does us much harm in many respects, has aroused public concern nowadays. For example, many doctors sell unnecessary but expensive medicines to their patients in order to get more money, And a lot of people buy fake certificates so that they can get better jobs. Also, some students cheat on exams. Even such famous star as Ouyang San, once considered China’s movie king, cheated the government on income taxes
It is unequivocally well known that being honest is beneficial to the people involved. Meanwhile, a sense of honesty builds up in others’ hearts, which, in turn, will earn you true friendship. But it is probably less well known that being honest in equally beneficial to ourselves.
Despite the widespread practices of dishonesty, we should take firm steps to end this unhealthy trend, so as to make the world more beautiful.