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DearPenFriendHello!MynameisSusana.I'mfromBerlin,Germany.IcanspeakGerman,English,andal... Dear Pen Friend

Hello!My name is Susana.I'm from Berlin,Germany.I can speak German,English,and a little chinese.Can you speak German? Ican teach you some works!
I have many bobbies.I love music.I can music.I can sing,and I can plan the the guitar.I can also play the piano and violin,but not very well.Can you play any instuments?
I also like sport. I can play tennis and badminton,but i can't skate.It's too diffcult.Can you skate?
Please write soon!I'm waiting for your first letter.

Your friend
Susana

请各位大哥大姐帮我写一封回信,一定要解答来信中提出的问题!
一定要精彩!!谢谢!!有追分!!最好高中水平!!要快!!
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呵呵,一个好笔友,记得多和人家交流,也要试着自己来写,这样对你的英语提高有很大的帮助。
我帮你写这封信的回信看看。。(比较口语化的方式)
Dear Susana,

i feel sooooo happy to recieve ur email!
(英语口语写法中,例如so,写成soooo代表你的语气十分强烈;然后ur代表your,老外都这么写,她虽然是德国人但是应该懂,这样写代表你对她感觉很好,谈话很随便)
so far as i know, i love you! :)
(意思是:从我对你的了解来看,我真是爱上你了!放心,你这样写对老外来说是很正常的,而且你这么写她会很开心,后面会解释为什么爱上她;然后笑脸符号:),是全球通用的)
you are so talented and i am so glad to be ur friend!
(这里就解释了为什么爱她,因为她太有才了。她说她会说好多种语言,我不知道你会什么,所以不好回答人家~,我乱写了)
i am sorry that i can't speak German but i really hope you can teach me in the future. as a reward, i will teach your Chinese!
(然后她介绍了她的爱好,喜欢音乐喜欢唱歌弹吉他钢琴小提琴……真能耐,不过都不是非常好,说明只是爱好,然后她问你会不会什么乐器,这里我也不知道你会什么~不好回答人家,继续乱写了)
i am not as good as you..i can just play piano, and i also like singing and dancing.
(之后她提到了运动方面,她会打网球羽毛球,但是不会滑冰,问你会不会滑冰我乱写ing)
i like sport too! i can play tennis but just for a short time, coz that is a biiiig exercise for me :). i can swim but can't skate either. i really hope we can learn it together!
(coz:cause,because的缩写,biiiig:看我第一个括号里的解释)

ok i am done here, it is your turn :) plz write me soon!
(意思是:我写完了哦,到你了~ 这样写会给她感觉很亲密的,嘿)

yours,
XX
(DATE)

希望能帮到你。记得多多和她交流哦~

参考资料: 还有什么要问的可以加我好友……恩……BYE

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2008-12-20
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Dear Susana:
My name is ***,I'm from ***,China.I'm very glad that I can be your pen friend.I can speak Chinese and English,but I can't speak German.
It is very kind of you to help me with my Gernam.
I also have many hobbies,and many of them are the same with yours.
I love music,too.And I can play the guitar,too.Sometimes,I play the band with some good friends after shool.I'm the solo guitar player in our band.We play the songs that are popular,such as BURNING,ALL RISE,
COMPLICATED,and so on.We can exchang the experience by writting latters.
I love badminton.I can't skate,either.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours sincerly,***
译文:
亲爱的苏珊娜:
我的名字叫做***。我来自中国***。很高兴能成为你的笔友。我能说汉语和英语,但我不能说德语。你能帮助我学习德语那真是太好了!
我也有很都爱好,其中很多都和你一样。我也很喜欢音乐,我也能弹吉他。有时,我和几个要好的朋友会在课后玩乐队。我是我们乐队的主音吉他手。我们玩的是流行歌曲,比如BURNING,ALL RISE, COMPLICATED等。我们能通过写信交流经验。
我喜欢网球。但我也不能滑雪。
展望你尽快回信!
***

自己做的,可能有语法错误,但希望对你有帮助。
鄙人急需悬赏分!!!!
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2008-12-27
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您好!我的名字是Susana.I '米柏林, Germany.I会讲德语,英语,和一个小chinese.Can你讲德语?爱凯恩教你一些作品!
我有许多bobbies.I爱music.I可以music.I可以唱,我可以计划的guitar.I还可以演奏钢琴和小提琴,但并不十分well.Can你打任何instuments ?
我也喜欢运动。我可以打网球和羽毛球,但我不能skate.It的太diffcult.Can您滑冰?
请填写很快!我等待您的第一个字母。

您的朋友
苏珊娜
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2008-12-26
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亲爱的朋友笔

您好!我的名字是Susana.I '米柏林, Germany.I会讲德语,英语,和一个小chinese.Can你讲德语?爱凯恩教你一些作品!
我有很多bobbies.I爱music.I可以music.I可以唱,我可以计划的guitar.I还可以演奏钢琴和小提琴,但不是很well.Can你打任何instuments ?
我也喜欢运动。我可以打网球和羽毛球,但我不能skate.It的太diffcult.Can你滑冰?
请写很快!我等待您的第一个字母。

您的朋友
苏珊娜
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Dear friends

Hello, thank you for your letter.
You receive the letter we are pleased. You are excellent, I was in China, Chinese is very strong, Oh, our English is a compulsory course with the very frequent, Japanese and Korean to know that since you and I have tried to link the study of the German oh. Now few would say that the day-to-day language, such as Hallo Goodbye Vielen Dank, dass Sie
I love this man very wide range of badminton and basketball players (like you, Oh) music friends like to sing the songs but not very good basketball I know I am a great basketball career in Germany skating very well how I did not come into contact with our The climate suited
Have the opportunity to come to China, then please call me the first time I and my compatriots out of the day you are most welcome the arrival of the

China begrüßt Freunde aus der Ferne

Your friends
*****(你的名字)

我用GOOGLE翻译器翻译的(公认的做的最好的翻译器) 话是我自己写 高中水平 嘿嘿
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