Question

帮我纠正我的英语作文的问题

How to get on well withothers
Everyone want make alots of friends , but how to get on well with others is a problem for people .So , I want to share some suggestion(建议) to you .
First , youshould learn to share . Everyone want get something , but they never thinkshare for others . This is scary and fool(愚蠢) . Then you should respect others . Only you respect others , othersrespect you . But sometimes we maybe forget this because of you hate them orothers . You should remember the most important is polite . In the end , youshould communicate with each other . Then you will find , you learn more thingthat never find in book . You will have a fell , I’m doing a right thing . Andthese people can make me learn l lots knowledge .
I hope everyonecan understand my suggestion , thank you.

Answer 1

第一句 wants to a lot of
suggestions with'

First , youshould learn to share with others but they never thinkshare with others
Only （only去掉，，句子结构不对）you respect others , othersrespect to you
But sometimes we maybe forget this because you hate them orothers
You should remember the most important thing is to be polite .
you learn more thingthat YOU never find in book

没打的句子就是没有错的地方。。综上，盘点一下楼楼不理解的知识点，，
一个是a lot of或lots of两者相等 别记错了
还有suggestions是可数的
everyone是不定代词 谓语动词用单数就是要加S
share跟的介词是with 是及物动词 要加宾语的
because加句子 because of加词或短语
再就是句子结构 一定要有主语 动词要有而且只有一个。。除非已有关联词连着。。
差不多这样。。英语不是好学的。。楼楼资质挺不错的。。加油哦
那啥。。采纳我