Question

两个英语作文，大学的 要求条理清晰，语句通顺，语法运用得当！ 求大神速解！

两个英语作文，大学的
要求条理清晰，语句通顺，语法运用得当！
求大神速解！

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Answer 1

I learned from *** that you were graduated with high honours from **University yesterday. I can well imagine how proud of you your parents are now. As I understand, you will continue studies in the United States soon, I wish you greater success in your studies and research work.

追答

It is a month since you came to attend our English class①。 We are going to have an English Evening at half past seven on 15th this month. It will last two hours. The teachers of English and the students of our class are going to sing English songs and perform some plays. You are welcome to attend it. And we'd be very pleased and thankful if you make a speech on“English Extensive Reading”②then.
Be sure to come. Thanks a lot.

追问

第一个作文可以再多点吗

追答

不是60词就够了么

初中60高中80

I learned from *** that you were graduated with high honours from **University yesterday. I can well imagine how proud of you your parents are now. As I understand, you will continue studies in the United States soon, I wish you greater success in your studies and research work. I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard on the past years, so that I am truly happy to see all your efforts get rewards. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. Admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, which bring you a good chance to learn from topping professors. Besides, it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.

可以了吗？

追问

我是大学，可以了，谢谢