检查一下有语法错误吗?
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感觉第二段的时态用一般过去式不太好,毕竟在说的这个中学时代目前还在过,还没完结。用现在完成时更好
I have got so much knowledge that I'm so proud of myself.(I'm so proud of myself如果用一般过去式,给人感觉是曾经很自豪,但现在不自豪了)
I have also learnt ... and I never say die. (同理, I never said die用过去式不好,毕竟前面有个never,从过去到现在到将来“从不”)
I often cheer myself up. (这里要把me改为反身代词myself)
I have got so much knowledge that I'm so proud of myself.(I'm so proud of myself如果用一般过去式,给人感觉是曾经很自豪,但现在不自豪了)
I have also learnt ... and I never say die. (同理, I never said die用过去式不好,毕竟前面有个never,从过去到现在到将来“从不”)
I often cheer myself up. (这里要把me改为反身代词myself)
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