Question

检查一下有语法错误吗？

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Answer 1

感觉第二段的时态用一般过去式不太好，毕竟在说的这个中学时代目前还在过，还没完结。用现在完成时更好
I have got so much knowledge that I'm so proud of myself.(I'm so proud of myself如果用一般过去式，给人感觉是曾经很自豪，但现在不自豪了)

I have also learnt ... and I never say die. （同理， I never said die用过去式不好，毕竟前面有个never，从过去到现在到将来“从不”）

I often cheer myself up. (这里要把me改为反身代词myself)

Answer 2

在英语上，比喻要有比喻词，不像中文，中文含蓄。学校是温暖的家园，这在中文中有比喻的含义，但英文要加比喻词like

追答

school is like a warm hometown for us,...

during past three years

i also learned how to face difficulties and that i never say going to die注意第一个句子可以不加that，但第二个要加that