求助高中英语改错 30
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你好,
首先这篇小作文写的挺好,可见小作者是有一定功底的,除了几处有小毛病,有可能是作者马虎了,改正如下:
1.gathered together with my schoolmates(或者classmates),因为只有I是不能gathered together的;
2.indicated that we had become adults 此处明显不能用现在完成时,have改had;
3. we were so moved by their love that…(so… that)
4.最后一句的that不能改为so,别的都改对了
祝你学习进步!
首先这篇小作文写的挺好,可见小作者是有一定功底的,除了几处有小毛病,有可能是作者马虎了,改正如下:
1.gathered together with my schoolmates(或者classmates),因为只有I是不能gathered together的;
2.indicated that we had become adults 此处明显不能用现在完成时,have改had;
3. we were so moved by their love that…(so… that)
4.最后一句的that不能改为so,别的都改对了
祝你学习进步!
2020-03-29
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That day we...
by their love so...
remained us that 对的不用改。
by their love so...
remained us that 对的不用改。
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